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Tittle: Bush Walk
When: Morning
Who:, Rose, Ana.B
Why: exercise
What: Spending time with my friends
Where: bush walk
Once upon a time, there was a little girl named Lily. She had amazing friends named Rose and Ana. They asked if she wanted to join them on the bush walk At 12.00. The girl went packing for the bushwalk. I went out with my colorful sparkle bag. I packed my yummy food, strong fly spray, spare clothing and hats, money for the bus, my phone and a first aid kit if I or my friends get hurt, OOh, and a flashlight.
I can't believe they are already there. It is 11.52 so they are 8 minutes early!!!!!!!.
I went out of the bus and said thank you for the ride. I saw my friends already packed for the trip. I told them we should start exploring now. All of the girls stopped eating, got their phones and cameras out and started to take some beautiful and delicate pictures of the birds.3 hours later the girls sat down and said I'm hungry. Their tummies were grumbling like a monster roaring in the wild.
We got our food out. Rose and ana found out that they had no more food cause they ate it all so lily had to share her food with them. After they packed up, They started to walk a little bit further. They even found squirrels, butterflies, possums and Hives full of bees. The girls said that they were very tired now.
So the only thing that they can do is go home. The girls split in their direction, Lily went on a bus, Ana got picked up from her dad and rose went in a taxi. When lily arrived home she said hi to her mum and dad and then started to laminate the amazing picture that all the pictures that the friends took. I put all of them on a book and then went to sleep dreaming about doing it again.
ReplyDeleteHi Danielle my name is Poet. I am a year six and I go to Paihia School. I really liked your blog post about your story because we went for a bush walk and that is where your story took place. I also I liked that the girl had very good friends and she was happy and I found your story very interesting because I like the words that you use to describe it. Did the girl see animals in the story ?
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ReplyDeleteHello Danielle my name is Angus I am a year 8 student Paihia School. I was just reading your bush walk blog post. I really how you told us when in the day this was. I think this post is really interesting because how you explained it. I found your post is cool because I've also got on a bus and went to the bush for a walk.
ReplyDeleteHave you ever been In the Ngahere for more than 12 hours?